Way off topic of cars... but it's General... right?
 

OK, there's alot of ppl that know me on here, as ive been a member for years. so i ask of you to check out ...... www.myspace.com/th3d0c and lemme kno what u think about the music that i'm doin...

my 2 solo songs are Rollin and Tru Life
thanks
mike

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the song you have one there, one guy sounds really bad and static is killin him, but the other dude is pretty good, the beat is nice but it should drop harder, if youre the first guy on there saying 'testing' you should be more chill back instead of talking, the beat is for a more chill flow

its too much of a whiteguy rap, the words arent slurred or twisted enough.

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pretty cool, kinda like scott said it sounds to whiteboyish which is not a bad thing. congrats on doin what cha doin

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http://myspace-507.vo.llnwd.net/0141...10979507_l.jpg

Needs smaller rims, bigger turbo.

Re: Way off topic of cars... but it's General... right?
 

Those arent rims. Those are a compressorand a turbine :y

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:8

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why do all rappers try to look ballin. It needs some work also

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not tryin to be mean, but by your life story, it doesnt seem like you've been through much

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deeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeetroooooooooooooooooitttttttttt tttttttt


look everyone its mike94se

http://myspace-500.vo.llnwd.net/0122...21717500_s.gif

Re: Way off topic of cars... but it's General... right?
 

heh heh.... really feelin the feedback!!! constructive critisizm is golden!!! I'm just waiting for the housings to get back from Garrett to put those 22" blades in.... muahahaha 117L. pushing a 800 trim.

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Not feeling it. :-\

Don't lose faith in yourself though.

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I wouldn't steal your album let alone buy it. Don't quit your day job.

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www.blackpeopleloveus.com :S

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You've got a lot of work to do, but its mostly polish and not lack of fundimental ability.

More effort into production, and the guy speaking in the beginning of Rollin sounds like he's trying a bit to hard which is wrong for rap... sounds average when he starts rapping... sounds pretty good when he things speed up and he has to talk fast. Try a couple practice sessions with a shot or two of liquor in you to smooth things out so the pretentious smooths out into poise in the less-than-intense parts.

If you want to try rap, I'd really do something more original than talking about your race and trying for street cred. You may be whiteboy rappers, we realise this within five seconds, no reason to point it out. Let the talent speak for itself.

Re: Way off topic of cars... but it's General... right?
 

well, thankx for the love and hate!!!! Its all appreciated! like i said, constructive critisizm is welcome or i wouldn't have posted on here..... I kno I'm a legend in the HMT eyes..... "hybrid section" WHAT!!!!


my day job is to make $$$$ off Bitches like you... and yes, i got plenty of rope for your newbie asses!!!



Crx304, The Doc, Mike

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:S

gross

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sounds like ---- to me, but in your defence, i hate rap so it might acctually be good

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