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on your response...the "enter"

I didn't click on any of the links. I only looked for the 'enter' and it took me awhile. I didn't even think that the logos were links (nor did I try to click them, I just looked at the page). I personally would make the logos just pictures and make a nice 'enter' button somewhere.

Just telling you from a normal dipshit who looks at a website.


one more thing, as I said...
I would highly recommend putting in there something about the business has been established for a long time...and isn't it sorta a 'family' business? Note that in the site also, maybe in the opening paragraph or a "A family business going for 8 years strong" or something along those lines. That IMO is well worth spending an extra $ on. I myself would rather buy from a small business rather than a large business. I could buy pro comp shocks about anywhere on the internet....tell me why I should buy from you, thats what you wanna relay onto the customer.

On that note, check out Steves site. Look at his opening paragraph and compare it to yours. Steve lays it right out to the customer for his goals to you as a customer as soon as you go to his site:

"Welcome to Stealthmode Performance, performance parts for performance cars. Our goal is to provide you with economical and innovative products to meet your performance needs.
Our parts are designed for the automotive performance world. We try to offer the parts that you need, and the prices you can afford. We don't waste time with useless parts that don't contribute to you going faster."

And then you have your intro:

Welcome to RJR Off-Road. Do you need a winch? Or maybe you need a lift kit? Whatever the part you need for your Truck, SUV, Jeep, or even your Hummer, we are the place for you. Dedicated to keeping prices as low as possible, and constantly growing the product line we sell, we strive to be your #1 choice when deciding where to buy your Off-Road accessories.

Your asking me if I need a winch or a lift kit. To anwser the question your asking the customer...yes. Thats why they are at your site. Now tell them why they should buy from you instead of joe-shmo on ebay with a feedback of 5,000 positive. Don't talk about adding more product's...strive to sell the ---- you have. Adding more products means your not selling what you have...why would someone wanna buy that from you?

Ok, im done. It does look good, looks like you put alot of work into it...just a few minor changes. :)

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needs less flares and more toyota parts.

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That got a chuckle. It's probably the sleep deprivation.

Uhm, site is clean and easy to navigate, but sizing ---- to fit 640X480 resolution is a step back to 1994. It is not 1994.

On the front page, the blue Contact Us .::. Terms and Conditions .::. Privacy Statement .::. Shopping Cart .::. Wish List .::. Lookup Order bullshit looks gay as hell with how it wraps around all crappy and un proportioned. Do something else.

Store interface itself is generic template commonly used these days; familiar, easy to navigate, parts categories are well laid out and stuff. Just make sure you keep on top of having pictures for each item (big enlargement where needed), it helps make things look professional.

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Oh, yah, you're fat.

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store is awsome.
front page needs some improvement, which could turn people away from the store
joseph davis is a balding mo-fo

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FGTJ!!

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Don't worry JD I think the bald top makes you look very....Roman.

You look like Cesar...with a meth problem.

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Frank street races in Japan
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rbn80...elated&search=

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Home page looks like it's from 1990, the huge tables and beveling on the font are wack. Did you make that with frontpage on windows 95?

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Agreed, I wouldn't throw away the front pagedesign, but a tweak is in order. Now, quote the tweak part, Frank, and make a meth joke. :)