Way off topic of cars... but it's General... right?
11-19-2006, 07:51 PM
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Re: Way off topic of cars... but it's General... right?
heh heh.... really feelin the feedback!!! constructive critisizm is golden!!! I'm just waiting for the housings to get back from Garrett to put those 22" blades in.... muahahaha 117L. pushing a 800 trim.
11-20-2006, 03:51 AM
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11-20-2006, 09:27 AM
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Re: Way off topic of cars... but it's General... right?
You've got a lot of work to do, but its mostly polish and not lack of fundimental ability.
More effort into production, and the guy speaking in the beginning of Rollin sounds like he's trying a bit to hard which is wrong for rap... sounds average when he starts rapping... sounds pretty good when he things speed up and he has to talk fast. Try a couple practice sessions with a shot or two of liquor in you to smooth things out so the pretentious smooths out into poise in the less-than-intense parts.
If you want to try rap, I'd really do something more original than talking about your race and trying for street cred. You may be whiteboy rappers, we realise this within five seconds, no reason to point it out. Let the talent speak for itself.
More effort into production, and the guy speaking in the beginning of Rollin sounds like he's trying a bit to hard which is wrong for rap... sounds average when he starts rapping... sounds pretty good when he things speed up and he has to talk fast. Try a couple practice sessions with a shot or two of liquor in you to smooth things out so the pretentious smooths out into poise in the less-than-intense parts.
If you want to try rap, I'd really do something more original than talking about your race and trying for street cred. You may be whiteboy rappers, we realise this within five seconds, no reason to point it out. Let the talent speak for itself.
11-20-2006, 05:09 PM
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Re: Way off topic of cars... but it's General... right?
well, thankx for the love and hate!!!! Its all appreciated! like i said, constructive critisizm is welcome or i wouldn't have posted on here..... I kno I'm a legend in the HMT eyes..... "hybrid section" WHAT!!!!
my day job is to make $$$$ off Bitches like you... and yes, i got plenty of rope for your newbie asses!!!
Crx304, The Doc, Mike
I wouldn't steal your album let alone buy it. Don't quit your day job.
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